Hansel and Gretel ninja chicks

Walht: summarize and take notes.

This week we revisited writing a summary and taking notes. My teacher read
this story to us and we had to write a summary using the ‘W’ words.

Here is my summary:

One day there were two siblings named that lived with they papa and mama,
there parents went somewhere to do something while they were gone they
were learn dojo. After Awhile they found out that they had been taken and
followed the clues leading to the forest. Hansel had found a house and
went in he found papa and mama, but then the fox was chasing her,
but Hansel couldn’t eacsp she was locked up too. Gretel listen
careful and got into the house quickly and started to unlock the
cages and pushed the fox into the cage. They mission was to look
after the town and make no one gets birdnapp.  

Reflection:
I understand the ‘ walht’ but find it difficult to write the summary in my own words.